It's a tough fact of life as an aspiring writer that often a submission gets no further than the bin or the delete button on an agent's computer.
In fact there are certain ways of writing a synopsis that guarantee I will reject a submission point-blank.
A synopsis is NOT like the blurb on the back of a published book. If you send in a short paragraph that says something like 'Amelia never knew how much her life meant to her, until she was on the verge of losing it!' and leave it at that, that tells me - the professional reader - nothing about the plot, and is therefore unhelpful.
A synopsis should include the whole of the plot. Do not leave out any twists or turns - the reader (me, an agent, an editor) is using it to assess the plot. To do this efficiently, we need all of it.
Having said that, a synopsis needn't include all the sub-plots - it's good to give an idea of what happens, but not a blow-by-blow chapter breakdown.
A synopsis is not another chapter for your novel. It should be no longer than about one side of A4 - but it can be single-spaced. It's not necessary to put each character's name in capitals or to add a sheet about characters either.
The entire purpose of a synopsis is to summarise the plot. It's not a marketing tool, part of your covering letter, or part of your novel or book.
To get practice at writing yours, why not try writing a synopsis of a classic - or of a book you've just finished reading - and check if it meets the criteria above! Let me know how you get on.
Best wishes,
Cressida
How not to send in a synopsis
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Posted on: 24/07/2009
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Categories: Getting Published, Literary Agents, Writing Advice, Synopsis
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Paul Hughes on July 24, 2009
Thanks for the info. It's amazing how difficult it is to get right. Writers can happily write a 100,000 word masterpiece, but when it comes to the synopsis, we find ourselves pulling teeth. Well, at least I do. Maybe I'm just weird. I've just finished writing my latest synopsis, and it was painful. How much to put in? How much to leave out? What should the tone be? How long? It's the biggest pain in the **** that I've come to the conclusion that synopses are, in fact, EVIL. And besides, what's wrong with a blurb? Isn't that how we buy books? I can see the reason why a synopsis is necessary, I just wish it wasn't such a big deal to agents et al. The meat of the story is in the book itself and trying to condense the book into one page doesn't make sense to me. Going on your advice, Cressida, I think I've managed to cover everything you've said. I only hope that may latest submissions get past this rather inconvenient stage. Just one question: Is it advisable to put a quote from a character in the synopsis? I've not done that this time...
Shankut Somaiya on July 24, 2009
Dear Cressida,
Well written synopsis not only reveals the story line and plot but it also ensures how good, confident and literate a writer is. A synopsis should act as a shroud that tells us what is really under it.
The editor of Virgo Press, Rebecca Swift's article in Writers' Artists' Year Book 2010 is a must read for all upcoming and a new writers. I enjoyed the article, thanks Rebecca.
The above Year Book 2010 is the bible of information and ocean of knowledge. The book is my best friend and a companion to enhance my writing horizon. It is well presented and the layout is sensible, easy and index covers nearly everything in the book.
Thank you Cressida for the article.
Regards
Shankut
lawrenceez on July 31, 2009
Hi, good article. I think writing a synopsis is really difficult. At one time, I made it out like a blurb, but I've since learned how to outline the main plot without leaving out significant bits.
Baubles, you were asking whether it's okay to put a quote from a character in the synopsis...I'm no expert, but I think it probably isn't. I would leave out any quotes and work at getting all the main elements of the plot down on one side of paper. I think including quotes anywhere on a synopsis might cause problems.
Frances Young on August 3, 2009
That's all helpful stuff. I am trying (in my third novel) to do a synopsis of each part as I get to the end of it. It's fresh in my mind and the pivotal moments are clear. When I add all the part-synopses together at the end, it'll be too long, of course, but it'll be a start - I hope!
Clare Green on August 4, 2009
How not to send in a synopsis? Perhaps the way that I entered one a few years ago!
Having entered the Wow Factor which was run by Faber & Faber I wrote what I thought was a wonderful synopsis that they had asked for as part of the entry. This as it turned out was a wonderful summary of the first three chapters that I had sent and nothing more. Oops!! It makes me wonder how far I would have got, had the synopsis been as wonderful as I thought it was. Even with my poor attempt I was sent a letter (which I will forever class as my 1st rejection) to notify me that although I hadn't won I had made it through to the last 15% of entrants.
Polish, polish, polish and send it away that's what I am doing to all the chapters and synopsis now. Fingers crossed!