Splicing the strands

December 17, 2009 by Writers, Artists and Insiders · Comments Off
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A guest post from Derek Neale, Lecturer in Creative Writing at The Open University:

Derek NealeThis is the last in my series of blogs, offering some thoughts about how drama might
 improve your fiction.

What have James Joyce’s Ulysses and Graham Swift’s novel Last Orders got in common? Not a lot, you might think. But you’d be wrong. The answer is time frame – the action of both is set over a single day.

You may not always want to confine your story to 24 hours, but knowing your Read more

Finding a voice

November 20, 2009 by Writers, Artists and Insiders · Comments Off
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A guest post from Derek Neale, Lecturer in Creative Writing at The Open University:

Derek NealeThis is the second of my blogs, offering some thoughts about how drama can be used to improve your fiction.

Actors impersonate. And in many ways that’s just what we do when we write a story – we put on the voices of our characters, and the voices of our narrators too. I think voice is very important in fiction.

In a film or play the mimicry is partly achieved by the actor’s intonation and performance. But a significant part of it is orchestrated by the scriptwriter, who provides the actor with a character’s specific diction and speech rhythms, as well as a subtext of that character’s fears and Read more

Making a scene

October 28, 2009 by Writers, Artists and Insiders · 5 Comments
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A guest post from Derek Neale, Lecturer in Creative Writing at The Open University:

Derek NealeThis is the first in a short series of blogs I’ll be writing about how drama can improve your fiction, each containing an activity for you to try at home.

‘Dramatise! Dramatise!’ was Henry James’ famous maxim to himself and to would-be novelists – and it remains true today. Your storytelling can gain momentum and finesse from looking at how dramatists do things.

More often than not a character’s emotional state is better revealed by being shown in action, rather than the narrator saying ‘he was sad’ or ‘she was angry’. The reader is happier interpreting what characters do, rather than forever being told what is happening.

Drama can inject the vital ingredient that will bring a story alive. I know this from my own writing and from the work of my students. And in most cases Read more

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