Agets' rejections

by Louis Nthenda
20th August 2013

I have received several rejections from agents. They have all said that they can't give reasons; but they also recommend that I send the submission to other agents who may have a different take on it. Is this just politeness or genuine advice? There are more agents I have submitted to who say they will answer only if they are considering representation. I think these are the worst kind because their silence subjects the writer to both hope, despair and uncertainty. I recommend ALL agents should send rejection messages even by way of form letters. What do others think?

Also the fact that the rejectionists don't give a hint on their reasons subjects me to thinking that I should revise the manuscript. But I think this would be a mistake. I should hand on to the manuscript in its present form, as long as I'm satisfied with it; until an friendly agent comes up with real commentary.

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And here is another rejection.

Dear Louis,

Thank you so much for sending me your work. However, having considered it carefully, I’m sorry to say that I don’t feel it’s right for my list.

I’m sure you’ll understand that the extremely high volume of submissions I receive means that unfortunately I’m not able to give more detailed feedback.

I wish you the best of luck with other agents.

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All other rejections are along the same lines as these two.

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21/08/2013

Thanks, Adrian. Here is one such rejection unedited:

Dear Louis

Thank you so much for sending me your novel and many apologies for the delay in getting back to you.

I've now had a chance to look at your work, alongside our reader, and though there is much to admire I’m afraid it’s not quite right for me. I have to absolutely love a new project before taking it on and I didn't feel strongly enough in this case.

I'm sorry not to be able to give you editorial feedback but I would recommend that you submit your work to other agents and I very much hope you find representation.

With good wishes,

Signed.

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20/08/2013

Please post examples of rejection letters. I would like to see what one looks like. Then I might be able to comment.

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20/08/2013