changed title

by katherine swain
24th February 2013

Just to let you know, I have changed the story of my book...

I wanted a softer name .... So its now called : Becoming Florence:)

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Bugger...... 2-0!!back to the first one:) lol

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katherine swain
24/02/2013

Dorry I agree with you!

I don't think there was anything harsh about your first title and. like Dorry, I think it seems to be more personal than your current title.

2-0!!

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24/02/2013

Hi Kath

I'm afraif I liked your 1st title. 'Becoming Nurse Kat' sounds much more like a personal story, because that is who you did become.

You say you wanted a 'softer' name. I didn't see anything 'harsh' about your 1st choice.

That title would grab me if I was in a book store, it would immediatly tell me that it was a story based a true life journey.

'Becoming Florence'.... I would look at that and it wouldn't tell me a thing.

So as I am the 1st to reply the score is currently 1-0 to 'Becoming Nurse Kat' :-)

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