For anyone whos read the first chapter of my life story, I have posted the second!!
I,d love comments, criticisms etc..helps me in the editing process and where to brush up ;)
thanks all for your reading and help:)
For anyone whos read the first chapter of my life story, I have posted the second!!
I,d love comments, criticisms etc..helps me in the editing process and where to brush up ;)
thanks all for your reading and help:)
Wow..thanks so much guys..... i didnt know if the first couple of chapters would go down well, but its great that people can relate to them.... im so excited... im half way through and your comments and help have encouraged me to sit and finish this piece off!! :)
Great guys, thanks so much!!
Katherine,
I like this because it feels real. Not being a girl myself and all that I can't relate to the periods but it feels real a bit like Adrian mole if anyone remembers him.
Your style of writing has compassion and comes across very well. Keep up the good work.
Damien x
I read it last night and I am so engrossed in your story!!
For the first time on this website, I actually read it and didn't think of it as an unpublished piece; I genuinely felt like I was reading something I had bought.
I will read it again this morning and see if there is anything that could be changed (although I doubt it!).
Such good writing :)