Commenting my poetry

Hello everyone,

I'm new in Writers & Artists community.

I just shared my poetry, can someone comment it please ?

That would be great of you.

Like many of us (I suppose), my goal is to be published someday.

But before that, I really need feedbacks on my writing so as to improve it.

Also, can someone tell me how to publish several shared works (like it is possible on facebook in "Notes" category?

Thank you in advance for your response, it will be greatly appreciated.

Have a nice day.