Feedback wanted for shared work -Release

by Victoria Tucker
15th May 2013

I have uploaded a short piece and would really appreciate some feedback on it as i am thinking of expanding it into a novel

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I've looked and left a comment :)

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Victoria Constant
17/05/2013

In what way?

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Victoria Tucker
16/05/2013

I can see this becoming quite confusing, can't you?!

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