Hello everybody,
firstly thank you for even taking the time to read this and, knowing that time is a very precious commodity, I quickly move on to my request;
I have just shared the first chapter of my ongoing work and would appreciate any and all comments, be they critical, constructive or both.
Please also comment as to whether you would like to read the next chapter.
With your invaluable feedback I hope to retrieve my motivation to complete this project, so, if you want to give an inspiring writer a boost, please leave your feedback.
I thank you most humbly for your valuable time.
Mark.
I read "cynical" instead of "critical". (Note to self: Should not read with radio on.)
I hope it's up for a few days, as I don't have time to read it now.
p.s. It would help if people who submit Qs about Works Shared posted the URL of the work concerned. Or am I over-lazy?
Please delete inspiring and replace with aspiring. (Note to self; Should not write with tv on in background)
Please delete inspiring and replace with aspiring. (Note to self; Should not write with tv on in background)