It has been a while. Thanks to the community highlighting some areas that needed work with my opening chapters, I have been in hiding and undergoing an extensive re-write. Coming back, out of the shadows, for some much needed feedback. I am hopping you will be both as thorough and as lovely as you were before.
It's good to see some familiar faces doing so well, well done to all those who have had work published since I was here last!
Come have a peak at my scribbling and say hello ^_^
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Have had a look and posted a brief comment. Nicely done with it