Hiya :)

by Melissa Taylor
9th September 2016

Would anyone be willing to look and comment on my work and i will look and comment on yours

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Thank you :)

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Melissa
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Melissa Taylor
09/09/2016

Hi, Melissa!

I have commented on 3 of your poems (as well as trying [here on Q&As] to point other users towards your shared works). Emilie van Damm has commented on a 4th (which I liked, but couldn't add anything to what she and Wilhelmina Lyre had written.)

I have 2 shared works on here. One of them is repeated (because of web-site technology: the poem is exactly the same). The other actually contains the whole of another work in one of the reply boxes... plus a link to another (illustrated) story.

Emilie's shared work includes contributions from Wilhelmina, myself, and several other members of this network. You are also cordially invited to take part. It could use some poetry. (But only 3 sentences at a time: read the guidelines at https://www.writersandartists.co.uk/question/view/2645 )

Looking forward to your comments...

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