How short is a short chapter?

by Victoria Whithear
4th April 2013

I'm shortening my overlong chapters but they now look too short to me. They're ranging between 4 and 15 pages double-spaced and my instinct is to join some of them back together again. My chapters were previously 30-50 pages each and I know that is too long, but to be so short seems wrong. Help!

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Well my shortest chapter is aprox...500 words. Because that was what was needed, and the very brevity itself has implications.

I don't think you should fret too much about page/word count per chapter-providing it's not too long!-but rather how it works within the greater narrative.

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12/04/2013

Douglas Adams wrote a chapter in The Hitchhikers Guide to the Galaxy that was just one paragraph.

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Andrew Atkinson
05/04/2013

Doesn't a chapter end when it feels like it should? Either on a cliffhanger, some kind of hook for the next chapter, or a natural break in the story, such as the end of a day.

I tried to combine some of my shorter chapters and it just doesn't work. Rather than going at it with a hacksaw it's time to adjust the pace.

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