Hi, I have uploaded 3000 words from my novella-Another Chance. It is a non-fiction account of someone very close to me who was diagnosed with cancer 5 days after the birth of her child. I (and she) think it is a fantastic story and ought to be told, hence the novella.
I am looking for feedback on punctuation (I have really tried my best, so please help), flow (there are some sentences that still jar and are awkward as I am too close to the topic) and whether you will alienated by the unflinching style and difficult subject.
Aha I make a lot of typos in my writing and when asking questions on here :)
whether you are alienated, not will. Apologies and am embarassed.
All done Sonya :)