Hi guys,
I've been doing another redraft of my novel and its nearly ready for submission. I've had reports from editors and beta readers and they are all so positive I could cry with happiness. However, there seems to be one hurdle I always hit and I'm starting to feel like its impossible.
My book is a slow burner and comes to 500 pages. Which isn't crazy, but its odd for my genre, but put that in a cover letter and publishers and agents seem to think its too long. But I love long books, so why is it such a hindrance? One of my favourite authors is Kate Morton who's books are always around the 500 page mark.
I'm not sure how much more I could cut.
Are literary agents and publishers just not going to go for a book that's that long (but a new writer) ? Or is it just a case of waiting and perseverance to find the right people?
Thank you for any responses
Amy.
Rules are made to be broken.
Hi Amy
I'm new to this site but my attention was caught by your post as I'm in a very similar situation: getting ready to submit first novel, readers and tutors love it... but also anxious about length. I've cut masses in successive rewrites but it's complex and 'richly textured' (even if I say so myself!) Just wanted to contact a fellow author to share experiences, etc. Cheers. Valerie
Hi Amy.
I'm sure if your 500 pages was skilfully cut and edited, then your slow burner would increase in pace. Established authors can break normal genre guidelines, but it's not advisable for a would-be author.
Genre Word Count Guidelines
Literary / Commercial / Women’s: 80,000 to 110,000
Crime Fiction: 90,000 to 100,000
Mysteries / Thrillers / Suspense: 70,000 to 90,000 – The variation covers Cozy Mysteries 70-75k.
Romance: 40,000 to 100,000 but for mainstream romance novels 70K-100K.
Fantasy: 90,000 to 120,000
Paranormal: 75,000 to 95,000
Horror: 80,000 to 100,000
Science-Fiction: 90,000 to 125,000
Historical: 80,000 to 120,000
Young Adult Fiction (YA): 50,000 to 80,000
Middle Grade: 25,000 to 40,000
Picture Books: 500 to 700
Short Stories: 1000 to 8,000
Novella: 20,000 to 50,000
Non-Fiction: 70,000 to 110,000
Flash Fiction: 100 to 500
The Debut Rule Breakers
There are many writers who choose the more difficult path of convincing publishing professionals that the parameters should be stretched beyond the norm and that their manuscript justifies a larger word count. Now regarded as classics, these debut novels had to be edited to reduce them to their published word counts.
1. Remembrance Rock: 530,030
2. Gone with the Wind: 418,053
3. Jonathan Strange & Mr Norrell: 308,931
4. Memoirs of a Geisha: 186,418
5. Jane Eyre: 183,858
6. Catch-22: 174,269
7. White Teeth: 169,389
8. Watership Down: 156,154
9. The Time Traveler’s Wife: 155,717
10. Sense and Sensibility: 126,194
Genre Guidelines continued.
Literary / Commercial / Women’s: 80,000 to 110,000 – These genres vary greatly in how their stories are told, but not in how many words are used to tell them. There are few exceptions of published debut novels not falling between these strict markers. The adherence to this is never more tested than when a writer pushes the limit to the full 110k or beyond. The upper marker is still accepted but will almost certainly be cut by an editor should the writer secure a deal. A literary agent will always look more favourable on these genre submissions being around the 100k mark.
Crime Fiction: 90,000 to 100,000 – The page-turning demands and competitive market enforce a word count which it is advisable to comply to.
Mysteries / Thrillers / Suspense: 70,000 to 90,000 – The variation covers Cozy Mysteries which can clock in at just 70-75k, to noir and historical which are often published at 80-90k.
Romance: 40,000 to 100,000 – Since it has many sub-genres this genre can vary greatly depending on the story. Regency Romance, Inspirational Romance, Romantic Suspense and Paranormal Romance all have a minimum of 40k. But for mainstream romance novels the parameters are between 70K and 100K.
Fantasy: 90,000 to 100,000 – One of the few genres with some leeway in first approach submissions, since many literary agents know publishers who will happily accept 120K. This is not to say one should aim for that higher count. But if a writer queries with 110k it will not be rejected on word count alone.
Paranormal: 75,000 to 95,000 – Although commonly entwined with other genres, standalone fiction in this genre is best when it is concise. Literary agents and publishers will allow flexibility when the story merits it, but for debut manuscripts it is best to refrain from anything above the industry standard.
Horror: 80,000 to 100,000 – A writer must be as ruthless with their words, as their antagonist is with the lives within the story. For if a grip on the reader is lost by overly long descriptions and digressions, the very tension which drives this genre fizzles out. Never go beyond the 100k limit without first checking with a freelance editor for revisions.
Science-Fiction: 90,000 to 125,000 – Encompassing many sub-genres results in a flexibility across the genre that is not often given to the others. Many publishers will accept works in the higher bracket and even beyond. While literary agents are open to submissions far below 90K, they will usually lean more towards those within the requirements because they know the devoted readers of this genre do not mind an epic read.
Historical: 100,000 to 120,000 – A genre rich with historical events means writers are afforded the luxury of an extended word count. However, writers who edit down to a 100k submission increase their chances of being read beyond the partials.
Young Adult Fiction (YA): 50,000 to 80,000 – This particular genre has become one of the hardest for writers to grasp when deciding on their own word count. This is due in large part to the variety of sub-genres within it and the trend for a book series with an ever greater word count. But for mainstream YA it is always best to stick to under 80K.
New Adult Fiction: 60,000 to 85,000 – Coined by the industry for the industry meant the requirements could be defined from the outset. Going above 85K still happens, but those for that do, they are giving a literary agent an easy reason to reject them.
Middle Grade: 25,000 to 40,000 – Such a tight restraint can be beneficial to a writer because it allows them to demonstrate their ability to edit accordingly. For debut books in this field the average word count tends to be 35K and it has therefore become the marker many industry professionals look for in queries from new writers.
Picture Books: 500 to 700 – When this is applied it equates to one or two lines per page, for a 30 page book. The one main advantage this genre has over every other is that literary agents and publishers will accept the full text with the initial query. There is no need for partials.
Novella: 20,000 to 50,000 – A story can be written in any of the other genres, but if its word count falls within these parameters it is usually classified as a novella.
Non-Fiction: 70,000 to 110,000 – Covering a broad range of topics still sees little variation in the size of published books. Although there is not a requirement for the work to be complete before an initial query, this is the word count literary agents want projected and delivered.
Short Stories: 1000 to 8,000 – Many contests will advise on their own maximum word count, sometimes as high as 20K. But those requests are extremely rare, as the majority will set a limit of 8K.
Flash Fiction: 100 to 500 – There is no flexibility to this as the word count determines if it is Flash Fiction.