Hi all
I've decided to try rewriting my MS in the third person, just as an experiment, as I can't seem to get my villain's voice just right. And thought third person might help with this??
Anyway I've had a little tinker with the first chapter just to see what reads better - 1st or 3rd (although in the protagonists voice, which I'm fairly happy with).
Would appreciate some feedback for anyone has the time/ inclination.
On a different, but not unrelated note, does the tinkering ever stop? Only joking, I know the answer to that one - unfortunately!
Thanks
Clare
Thankyou Lorraine :)
I've had a look, Clare.
Yes, the tinkering stops, when you're as sure as you can be that you've been true to the characters and the plot and the reader. (No pressure then!)
Lorraine
I meant to say, it's in thriller and it's approx 1400 words. Thanks