Is my idea good?

by Grace Gotts
31st July 2015

I went online to a plot generator and made a random plot. I then changed a little bit, what do you think?

Tristan Jones suspected something was a little off when a vampire tried to bite him when he was just ten years old. Nevertheless, he lived a relatively normal life among other humans.

It wasn't until years later when he he bumped into the devilishly adorable vampire, Lucy Roth, that his life finally began to make sense.

However, Lucy proved to be kind and seemed to have an unhealthy obsession with writing. Tristan soon learnt that Lucy had taken an oath never to take pleasure from a human being.

When Tristan's old friend is injured in a polo accident, Tristan realises his own life is at risk.

Despite Lucy's bloody wounds and long claws, Tristan finds himself falling for the vampire. Only fate will decided whether he kills or protects her.

One night, a gremlin appears before Tristan and warns him of a darkness within Lucy. The gremlin gives Tristan the ripped candlestick - the only weapon that can defeat a adorable vampire.

Will Tristan find it in himself to kill the only creature who has ever made him feel truly uneasy?

Thanks

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Lorraine, I write about vampires due to my BFF's love of twighlight. I write to please others, so my first story will be dedcated to her.

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Jimmy, I have declined your request. Please do not talk as i will have to report you.

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Reading Jimmy's comment after mine, I see that you are very young. Therefore you are writing for people of your age. This kind of thing might appeal to computer-game players, as it sounds like a quest - all about solving problems, not about characters.

I still think vampires are a bit past their best, but why not just write your story and see what happens?

Lorraine

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