I have posted another of my stories for you, its above my first work as ive figured you can only post one story at a time... based on an earthquake and survival.... any comments HUGELY APPRECIATED... ;)
Thanks, kat.
I have posted another of my stories for you, its above my first work as ive figured you can only post one story at a time... based on an earthquake and survival.... any comments HUGELY APPRECIATED... ;)
Thanks, kat.
Thanks for that...lots of great comments and constructive feedback!! they will help me to build on future stories :) much appreciated!!
Hello Kat. I read your two posts and I think they are all wonderful. 'Voices from beneath the rubbles' is quite realistic. But 'For what its worth' sounds a bit fanciful to me. The kind of "war" you portrayed there seem too matured for the teenage characters. Also there is nothing in the story to warrant such harsh encounter. Suppose there was a bitter breakup the "war" may seem justified. But all the same I like the humour. Good work Kat. -Baggy.