New writer in need of critique

by Oliver Campbell
13th February 2013

Hello

I have posted a short story entitled "the concerto". I would really appreciate any critiques. The story is a modern fable, so if that floats your boat or if you just want to help out a new writer, send me a review.

Thanks

Olie

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Hi Aanya

Just click on the name of the writer and view shared work.

Olie

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Oliver
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Oliver Campbell
15/02/2013

Hi Olie!

Would love to read your story but cannot figure out where it is posted...am new to this website.

Could you let me know where the story/stories mentioned by you and other readers are mentioned?

Many thanks,

Ananya

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Ananya Sarkar
15/02/2013

Hello Olie, I'd love to read your piece. I will get back to you by the end of the day! All best, Kate

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