Short story

by Andrew Atkinson
2nd March 2013

Hi everyone

I've just posted a short story and I would love some feedback please.

Thanks

Replies

Andrew,

Done, Liked,

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damien
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damien Isaak
02/03/2013

Only if you read mine!! Lol!!

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