Short Story feedback

by Amy Mager
2nd August 2018

I wondered if anyone had any spare time today to look over a short story I've written? I wanted to enter into a short story competition this week - which I've never done before!

And if I put it on 'Share Work' on here it will just get lost in spam and go unread.

Thanks for any replies.

Replies

Hi Amy I'll read it over the weekend.

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ELSIE BYRON
03/08/2018

Hi Amy.

I got a few days off.

If you want to send.

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Andy Tomkinson
03/08/2018

Hi Amy,

Would be more than happy to have a read.

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