Short story in need of reading

by Constantin Tureac
14th February 2013

I have just shared a short story and I would appreciate some comments, if anyone has some time to read it. Thanks

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Read. Enjoyed. Commented.

Very, very good work.

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Jennifer
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Jennifer Harvey
15/02/2013

Thanks for reading Jacob Jones, I think you are of to a very good start and I love the way you write.... hope to see some more soon.

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damien
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damien Isaak
14/02/2013

I forgot to mention that I've read 'The boy within' and I liked it very much.

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Constantin
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Constantin Tureac
14/02/2013