Hey,
I have finally uploaded my first piece onto this website and I was just thinking that it would be great is anyone would mind taking a look at it and leaving some feedback?
The story can be found in two parts here: https://www.writersandartists.co.uk/profile/theresa-mary-mc-glinchey/myworks
A little fore-warning, the story is not all that great, I know. It was written for a school project and I just thought that I would see what other people thought of it.
I know that it is long, but I really would appreciate if anyone could just spare the time and let me know what you think of it.
Thanks
I really enjoyed reading this :)