What invaluable lessons have you learned?

by Adrian Sroka
29th March 2013

I have nearly finished what I hope is the penultimate thorough edit of my novel. I must have done over twenty edits. Editing has been an exhausting, but enlightening process. In the beginning, I thought that each subsequent edit would be much easier. I was wrong. But after each subsequent edit my novel was tighter and pacier.

During my edits I discovered weaknesses, repetition, shoes and socks problems, clunky sentences, poor grammar and punctuation, missing signposts, unsuitable chapter titles, chapters that ended without a hook or cliff-hanger, 48,000 words of superfluous text, lengthy descriptions, and dialogue that needed much improvement.

I thought my first draft was brilliant, but Hemingway was right, ‘The first draft of everything is always shit.’

I continued to read the best award winning authors of adult and children’s literature as I wrote my first draft. I believe it was beneficial to my prose. I noticed a significant improvement in my writing, the further I progressed through my manuscript.

I have learnt much in the process of writing my first novel. I believed I had a firm grasp of the aspects of the novel, but knowing how to best orchestrate them was another matter. I hope that I have got it right. I have more work to do, but I can see the light at the end of the tunnel.

The most important lesson I learned is to thoroughly plan from the outset. If I had planned better, I would have saved myself considerable effort and time. But I am confident that the second novel in what I hope will be a series, will take less than half the time of the first.

Replies

1. Commitment is everything, but avoid being committed.

2. Plan everything, but don't stick to the plan.

3. Always plan bedtime if you don't want to fall asleep during the day job.

4. Get up out of the chair every few hours, even if you are on a roll.

5. Remember to notice people waving at you, talking to you or in anyway trying to communicate from the world you actually inhabit.

6. The book will never be finished. Give it to the copy editor when it seems just one more read through away, because it's always going to be one more read through away.

I'm not sure I've learned number 6 yet. Let's just say it's in the theory stages.

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