Where am I going to ?

by Mehdi Kasbel
27th September 2013

I have many ideas that can potentialy make a good novel to write.

Almost everything is ready in my mind : the charachters, the setting for the story, the beginning of what could be a plot (altough, I'm not too much in the classic idea of a plot)

But...

While in a short-story, the quickness of the story line development and the area of possibities for ending the story is large and various (for example, I frequently use sudden and steep ends) I find the mechanics of a novel more difficult !

It's a bigger machine, with a greater inertia force, so it's harder to stop all this stuff you placed on the rails... must I decelerate to manage a smooth finishing, or let it go crescendo, but a crescendo ending in what ? And will it sounds good ?

I feel that in some cases It could be something less convergent than in a short-tory ending, more open but, I still not find how to make it !

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Reply to Jonathan Hopkins.

My comment about avoiding a epilogue was half-in-jest.

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28/09/2013

'Avoid writing an epilogue, because that’s the beginning of book two in your series.'

I have to disagree. Collins Online says it's 'a short postscript to any literary work, such as a brief description of the fates of the characters in a novel'. In that case it's the wind-down after the end. The presentation scene in 'Return of the Jedi' if you like.

I like epilogues. You can finish the story with a real high and let the reader's heart rate slowly decelerate over a couple of pages. I've written two novels that use them so far, and plan the same strategy in the third.

But then, I like prologues too :)

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27/09/2013

Simon P.Clark : about the explosion with fizzles, yeah, totaly (I have a visual way for creating, so every visual metaphor make sens for me :) )

I didn't see the X-Men prequel, but one other movie that was sloppy is Dark Knight Rises, with improbable sequences accumulating as the story was approaching the end and an unsound finishing !

Victoria Whithear : I agree on what you're saying about subplots, really difficult to organize this, so ending them one by one like they was short-stories, letting some for the fizzles and finishing the main line in something suspended in time, like the persistent hissing in ears after the explosion... if that makes sens )

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