Suddenly, I wake up feeling a dull headache.
Where am I?
I try to figure out what's going on around me, however, I can't make out shapes surrounding me, because my eyes are duzzed by greenish brightness as if I came out from underground to the meadow under the sun.
My ears are also dulled and can hear nothing but something like a noise made by a gaggle of many people.
What's happening to me?
I can't move my body----my arms, they are bound to the arms of the cold stone chair.
Now I see. I'm sitting on the chair,as for my body, is too bound to the back of it.
Have I been snatched?
This fear creeps from foot to head, almost bursts out of my mouth.
I wonder my mum is really worried about me.
Gradually, my eyes are accustomed to this brightness, I can see my situation very well now, after a few blinking.
'...settle down, settle down' croaks somebody in front of myself.
Next moment, I jerk my head up, then find myself catching narrow brown pupils belonging to a toad who has a round glasses, a white wig, and a long black cloak
I wonder I become crazy at last.
I tear my eyes from the toad's so that I can look side to side, up and down.
After a few seconds, I found my self sitting on the black stone seat in the middle of the audience(to my surprise,they are also toads and frogs), they are sitting round me in a circle on the platform. My arms are binded to the arms of the chair, so I can't scratch my nose tickling.
' you are...eh...what's your name, boy?'says the toad the very in front of me.
'Me? Leo,m-my name is Leo', I murmur at the corner of my mouth.
'Sorry?', he leans towards me and opens his tremendous wide mouth, so I shrink with fear of being eaten.
'L-Leo, sir'
'...and how old are you, a human boy?', he makes his body backwards then sinks himself in a hard leather chair comfortably.
'I'm six years old, I suppose'
'Do you know your guilt?' he says,as fumbling about something on the desk roughly.
I was intrigued by the title Rena. Though English is not your first language, I found your storyline intriguing also. There is no preamble as to how Leo got into this predicament. Depending on the age group you are aiming for - perhaps you might give a little more thought to what he might have been doing before? It does show promise though and certainly has its moments but needs a bit more work as mentioned in the comments above. Encouraging.
Thank you very match for reading my work and writing comment.
I'm Rena.
Yes, My first language is not English.
I think I need more practice of English,not only writing but also hearing, speaking.
So, I really appriciate your comments which pointed out my work's mistake.
It will help my learning English.
To tell the truth, I haven't been abroad in entire my life.
However, I love Engrish literature, and I think sooner or later the time will come when I need to command English precisely.
I'm studying life sciense in my university, so I need the ability to speech at an achademic meeting.
I'll try to improve my English, if you don't mind, please tell me my incorrect grammer or words, and expresions.
Hi Rena.
With a little polish and re-work, this could be a nice piece of writing.
Like Cathy (please accept my apologies if I'm wrong), I see that maybe, English is not your first language, which is apparent by the error of some of the words, and their context in a sentence.
However, don't let it put you off, keep going and practise, practise, practise!
Sarah :)