Commenting my poetry

by Letizia Costantini
21st February 2013

Hello everyone,

I'm new in Writers & Artists community.

I just shared my poetry, can someone comment it please ?

That would be great of you.

Like many of us (I suppose), my goal is to be published someday.

But before that, I really need feedbacks on my writing so as to improve it.

Also, can someone tell me how to publish several shared works (like it is possible on facebook in "Notes" category?

Thank you in advance for your response, it will be greatly appreciated.

Have a nice day.

Replies

Thank You Laura and Dorry for your replies.

Please do not hesitate to make comments.

It is not so much about the content but more over the writing style.

And just for your information, English is not my mother-tongue

so don't be surprised if there are grammatical mistakes :)

Thank very much. Have a nice sunday.

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Letizia
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Letizia Costantini
24/02/2013

Hi Again Letizia, I have only just skimmed over them at the moment as I am pretty busy this evening. There seems to be a lot of pain in your poems :-( However, I will read them through better , hopefully later tonight.

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Dorry Lawlor-Hudson
21/02/2013

I'll take a look sometime this evening Letizia.

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21/02/2013