I hope the title is clear.
It's a problem I encounter everytime I'm writing a horror story or a short story where some suspense is needed.
I find myself using too much of "suddenly", "all of at once", "unexpectedly", at places where they all seem necessary.
So I don't know what's the solution. Rather than keep on using more synonyms or to learn to decrease the occurences of
Sorry about that, so here's the question :
I hope the title is clear.
It's a problem I encounter everytime I'm writing a horror story or a short story where some suspense is needed.
I find myself using too much of "suddenly", "all of at once", "unexpectedly", at places where they all seem necessary.
So I don't know what's the solution. Rather than keep on using more and more synonyms, should I simply learn to decrease the occurences of these adverbs ?