Short Story Review

by Dan Forrester
27th May 2015

I have a short story "Holes and Other Things" published on Penny Shorts - I'd really appreciate any reviews/ratings. It's 50p to download but cheaper than a can of coke and will hopefully give you a smile for the day!

http://www.pennyshorts.com/stories/ghost/holes-and-other-things/

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Hi again Dan - I just read your story and absolutely love it! So funny and some great turns of phrase. I have put a review on the site, but it usually takes a day or two to show up. I'll mention it on their Facebook page too, which is underused at the moment. Well done & I hope you get lots of readers.

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susan Russell
28/05/2015

Hey Paulette - thanks for the positive comments, I'm glad you enjoyed it. If you have 2 minutes to copy and paste them into the comments box on Penny Shorts then that'll boost my ratings :-)

Hi Susan - will do, no problem! Love girlie stories *fingers crossed behind my back*

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28/05/2015

Hi Dan

I have one on there too (Something Old Something New) under the Romance section. I'll have a look at yours over the next day or two & leave a review. I'd appreciate it if you could do the same for me, but don't feel obliged to as it's more a girly story really!

All the best

Sue

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