Straining to hear something - which is better?

by Robert Gill
14th January 2013

I'm having a phrasing headache that I can't figure out. When a group of people are straining to hear something quiet, which is correct:

"She called for silence and they all strained their ears." or

She called for silence and they all strained their hearing."

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The sentence does not work.

Why would you strain your ears, if someone called for silence?

Howabout, In a commanding tone/firm voice she called for silence and the noisy assembly/crowd quietened.

I hope that helps.

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Pleasure.

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Thanks, Philip! That's just what I was looking for. I just could quite think of how to phrase it.

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