Thank you to all who read commented and made suggestions about my agents submission letter. I have taken the comments seriously and done some work, if anyone gets the chance please take a look and let me know where it falls down. I have put the same letter on twice but the second minus one para. I think maybe that is the better one but you will know which is worse! thanks in advance Paul G.
Lorraine I have left a message on shared work for you. Thank you.
Dave I hope you read this, I have left you a thank you reply on my shared work. Thanks Paul.
Thank you Lorraine, again. I have left a post for you replying to your post on shared work. Thanks Lorraine. Paul.