I've written a 'flash fiction' story about loneliness. Please tell me which of these two sentences might make you want to read on...
1. There wasn’t a club he could join.
2. It is a very lonely business when you are unique.
Both sentences are in the story but someone told me that she found one more powerful than the other.
Your views will be much appreciated. Thank you.
And I am the only one who thinks it is the latter sentence. Not cliched in my eyes
I agree with Jennifer, Adrian and Damien.
First one yes